I do feel like I articulated all of this very well. Of all of my secondaries, I gave my state schools the most attention, as they are my top choices. My application has a pretty strong theme, having focused my studies, volunteer, clinical, research and shadowing experiences on chronic disease, as it is one of my biggest interests in medicine. I have family connections to diabetes and heart disease, and the general population (especially the underserved) struggle with these issues, so I have focused my activities over the past five years around this interest. My primary and secondary applications demonstrate this theme, and specifically for the ESFCOM secondary, I focused on my experiences working with the underserved in free clinics, abroad, and I talked about teaching the younger generations (I taught in elementary schools in the inner-city).
I feel like I articulated all of this well. Of all of my secondaries, I gave my state schools the most attention, as they are my top choices. My application has a pretty strong theme, as I have focused much of my studies, volunteer, clinical, research and shadowing experiences on chronic disease, as it is one of my biggest interests in medicine. I have family connections to diabetes and heart disease, and the general population (especially the underserved) struggle with these issues, so I have focused my activities over the past five years around this interest. My primary and secondary applications demonstrate this theme. Specifically for the ESFCOM secondary, I focused on my experiences working with the underserved in free clinics, abroad in a third-world country, and I talked about teaching the younger generations (I taught in elementary schools in the inner-city). I tied all of this back to specific reasons why I believed ESFCOM would help me achieve the career goals that I have in these areas.